Millionaire BBC TV presenter Kristian Digby, 32, found dead by ex-lover in his East London flat
Headline: no brevity, long sentence. loaded language, naming, listing,
No Deck
First paragraph: Who is involved "BBC presenter Kristian Digby has been found dead"
Broadsheet:
Lord Mandelson asks House of Lords to investigate Lord Ashcroft
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/newstopics/politics/conservative/7350548/Lord-Mandelson-asks-House-of-Lords-to-investigate-Lord-Ashcroft.html
Headline: no brevity, alliteration, repetition.
No Deck
"investigate" - action verbs/power verbs
First Paragraph: Introduction. What is happening, who is involved. (Intro is in use of the Deck)
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